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The Comparison of various source of Energy production in European Countries in 1990 and 2000
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The two pie charts describe the differentiation of several sources of energy manufacturing in Europe in the years 1990 and 2000. The data indicates that the manufacturing of fossil fuel, gas, and coal has the biggest portion but experienced a decrease. The production percentage of nuclear and other sources has the least mount but experienced increase.
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The two pie charts describe the proportion of several sources of energy produced in Europe in the year 1990 and 2000. The data indicates that the use of fossil fuel, gas, and coal hace the biggest portion but experienced a decrease. The production of nuclear and other sources has the least amount but experienced increase.
DeleteIn 1990, fossil fuel and gas had the highest percentage, which accounts for 29% for each source. These two productions of energy gradually degraded to 26% for fossil fuel and 28% for gas a decade later. This also happened to coal which witnessed 2% decrease and made up a quarter of the total energy production at the end of the period.
Unlike the three sources of energy afformentioned,nuclear and other sources of energy show the opposite pattern in which it started with the least number of production at 4% and 10% resoectively, but slightly rose to 10% and 11% accordingly.
It's a very good writing indeed, with a good grammatical range and accuracy as well as good arrangement of ideas. The same goes for vocabulary, although some improvements still need to be done. I have corrected some of the minor mistakes and I hope it will help. Keep up the good work!!!